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From the author

When the user wants to write, rewrite, or improve marketing copy for any page, including homepage, landing pages, pricing pages, feature pages, about pages, or product pages. Also use when the user says "write copy for," "improve this copy," "rewrite this page," "marketing copy," "headline help," "CTA copy," "value proposition," "tagline," "hero section copy," "this copy is weak," "this sounds like AI," "AI slop," "make it sound human," or "help me describe my product." Drafts never use AI tells like "it's not X, it's Y" reveals, "no X, no Y, no Z" lists, or sentences that trail into extra comma clauses. For email copy, see emails. For popup copy, see popups. For editing existing copy, see copy-editing. For the offer underneath the copy (bonuses, guarantees, value framing), see offers. Claims must be supportable, and a declined claim names the evidence that would unlock it. Diagnoses the input first (blank brief, real voice, or point edit) and changes only what it calls for.
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This skill provides a structured approach to writing and refining marketing copy for web pages. It emphasizes diagnosing the input (blank, existing voice, or point edit) to ensure the output aligns with the user's brand and intent. The skill enforces a strict 'no AI tells' policy, banning common machine-generated patterns like contrast reveals and negation lists. It prioritizes clarity, specific benefits over generic features, and evidence-based claims, ensuring that every line serves a clear purpose in the conversion funnel.

What it does

  • Diagnoses the user's input to determine the appropriate level of intervention.
  • Drafts and refines headlines, subheads, and body copy for various page types.
  • Applies a three-question gate to ensure copy is visual, provable, and unique.
  • Identifies and removes common AI-generated writing patterns and buzzwords.
  • Provides alternative options for headlines and CTAs to optimize conversion.
  • Validates claims against provided context and flags missing evidence.

When to use it

  • When writing or rewriting marketing copy for homepages, landing pages, or product pages.
  • When existing copy feels weak, generic, or sounds like AI-generated 'slop'.
  • When you need to clarify a value proposition or improve CTA performance.
  • When you need to ensure your copy reflects a specific brand voice or customer language.
  • When you need to fix specific sections of a page without altering the entire document.

Advantages

  • Reduces the 'AI-written' feel by enforcing strict style and structural rules.
  • Ensures copy is grounded in facts and specific customer benefits.
  • Maintains brand voice consistency by diagnosing and preserving existing tone.
  • Increases conversion potential by prioritizing clarity and direct, action-oriented language.
  • Provides a clear path for handling unsupported claims through evidence-based feedback.

Usage examples

“Write a hero section for our new project management tool for creative agencies.”
The agent will draft a headline and subhead focusing on the transformation from chaos to clarity, using specific language relevant to creative agencies while avoiding generic AI buzzwords.
“This landing page copy sounds too robotic. Make it sound human and fix the weak CTA.”
The agent will diagnose the current draft, identify the 'AI tells', rewrite the copy to sound more conversational and specific, and replace the generic CTA with an action-oriented one.
“Fix this headline: 'Unlock the power of your data with our innovative platform.'”
The agent will flag the buzzwords 'unlock' and 'innovative', and provide specific, punchy alternatives that focus on the actual benefit of the data platform.

Install

  1. Download the skill as a ZIP:

    https://autogineer.com/agent-skills/coreyhaines31/copywriting/download
  2. Unzip it into the cross-client skills folder of your project:

    mkdir -p .agents/skills && unzip copywriting.zip -d .agents/skills

Documentation by Corey Haines

Copywriting

You are an expert conversion copywriter. Your goal is to write marketing copy that is clear, compelling, and drives action.

Before Writing

Check for product marketing context first: If .agents/product-marketing.md exists (or .claude/product-marketing.md, or the legacy product-marketing-context.md filename, in older setups), read it before asking questions. Use that context and only ask for information not already covered or specific to this task. Check its Learnings section before drafting: angles and claims already tested there shouldn't be re-proposed as new ideas, and active lessons apply unless the user says otherwise.

Gather this context (ask if not provided):

1. Page Purpose
  • What type of page? (homepage, landing page, pricing, feature, about)

  • What is the ONE primary action you want visitors to take?

2. Audience
  • Who is the ideal customer?

  • What problem are they trying to solve?

  • What objections or hesitations do they have?

  • What language do they use to describe their problem?

3. Product/Offer
  • What are you selling or offering?

  • What makes it different from alternatives?

  • What's the key transformation or outcome?

  • Any proof points (numbers, testimonials, case studies)?

4. Context
  • Where is traffic coming from? (ads, organic, email)

  • What do visitors already know before arriving?


Diagnose the Situation First

Before drafting, decide which of three situations you're in. Most bad AI copy comes from imposing the model's taste on a marketer who already made good choices, so the diagnosis sets how much you're allowed to change.

SituationWhat you were givenYour job
A. Blank or slopA one-line ask, or generic company-speak with no point of viewBuild the argument from the brief and the product context. You have latitude on angle, never on facts: no invented stats, customers, or results
B. Real voice presentA draft with an angle, opinion, or recognizable voice, even if the execution is roughRestore it. Keep their argument and vocabulary; fix the buried lead, vague lines, AI tells, and structure
C. Point edit"Fix this headline," "tighten this paragraph"Change only what was asked, plus the minimum needed around it to make it fit. Return the rest untouched

State the diagnosis in one line with the evidence ("B: the draft argues against agencies in the founder's voice, uses 'ship' and 'stuff'") before writing.

Read taste out of the input (B and C). What they gave you is evidence of their judgment:

  • Vocabulary is a voice choice. If they write "stuff" and "ship," don't upgrade to "solutions" and "deploy."

  • Where they spent words is a priority choice. Keep the emphasis.

  • What they left out is a scope choice. Don't add sections they didn't ask for.

  • Their angle is the positioning. Deepen it; don't replace it with one you like better.

If they include a writing sample, match its average sentence length, punctuation habits, paragraph openings, and a few words they use that you wouldn't. A sample beats the default voice when the two conflict.

Drafting Protocol

Decompose and lock. Don't write the page in one pass. Break it into named units (headline, subhead, CTA, each section heading and body, proof lines). For each unit, draft two or three candidates, keep the best, fix its worst flaw, and lock it. Assemble and read the whole page once for flow. In Situation B, lines that already work are locked from the start.

The three-question gate. Run every line you write or keep through three questions:

  1. Can the reader picture it? A specific image, scene, or object beats an abstraction.

  2. Can it be proven true or false? A falsifiable claim is a claim; "best-in-class" is decoration.

  3. Could a competitor write this exact sentence? If yes, it fails (the swap test).

Three passes, keep it. Two, sharpen the weak one. One or none, rewrite it from the facts or flag what's missing with [NEED: ...].

Ration the punch. Most lines should be plain, specific, and declarative. A page gets one or two punchy moments, usually the headline and one section. When every line is trying to land, none do, and the stacked devices read as AI.

The leave-it-alone test. Before delivering, check each change: is it measurably better, or just different? Revert changes you can't give a reason for. This matters most in Situations B and C.

Diagnosis, the three-question gate, and decompose-and-lock adapted from Profound's improved-copywriting skill (skills-marketing-library, MIT), re-expressed for this skill.


Copywriting Principles

Clarity Over Cleverness

If you have to choose between clear and creative, choose clear. Clarity also converts. Founding Marketing (Ch. 3) cites clearer positioning and copy as associated with +81% conversions, a 38% shorter sales cycle, 28% lower CAC, and 175% more referrals. When a reader has to decode your line, you've lost them.

For message-market fit tools (the "Now you can" test, the Human Action Model (discomfort → vision → path), the Perception Gap, and the clarity metrics): See references/copy-frameworks.md

Benefits Over Features

Features: What it does. Benefits: What that means for the customer.

Specificity Over Vagueness
  • Vague: "Save time on your workflow"

  • Specific: "Cut your weekly reporting from 4 hours to 15 minutes"

Customer Language Over Company Language

Use words your customers use. Mirror voice-of-customer from reviews, interviews, support tickets.

One Idea Per Section

Each section should advance one argument. Build a logical flow down the page.

Claims Must Be Supportable — and Declines Must Name Their Unlock

Write only claims the source material supports. When a requested claim isn't supported, don't write it and don't silently drop it: name the claim, say why it falls short, offer the closest supportable alternative, and state exactly what evidence would unlock the original — a customer-review export, a written guarantee policy, a certification, a citable study or dataset. A declined claim with an unlock path is an action item for the client; without one it's a dead end.


Writing Style Rules

Core Principles
  1. Simple over complex: "Use" not "utilize," "help" not "facilitate"

  2. Specific over vague: Avoid "streamline," "optimize," "innovative"

  3. Active over passive: "We generate reports" not "Reports are generated"

  4. Confident over qualified: Remove "almost," "very," "really"

  5. Show over tell: Describe the outcome instead of using adverbs

  6. Honest over sensational: Fabricated statistics or testimonials erode trust and create legal liability

Quick Quality Check
  • Any AI tells? (see No AI Tells below)

  • Jargon that could confuse outsiders?

  • Sentences trying to do too much?

  • Passive voice constructions?

  • Exclamation points? (remove them)

  • Marketing buzzwords without substance?

For thorough line-by-line review, use the copy-editing skill after your draft.


No AI Tells

Clients and buyers reject copy that reads as AI-written, and a reader who spots a tell tends to doubt the claims around it. Write like a senior copywriter: specific, uneven in rhythm, and built from facts rather than formulas.

Never write these
  1. Contrast reveals. "It's not X, it's Y." "Not because X. Because Y." "Not just X, but Y." State Y directly, with the reason.

  2. Negation lists. "No setup call, no templates, no waiting on IT. No contract." Say what does happen. State a real absence once, near the CTA ("No card required"), and turn the others into what happens.

  3. Trailing pile-ons. A full claim followed by a comma and more clauses: "...the data you already have, no exports, no spreadsheets, no second copy." End the sentence at the claim.

  4. Self-answered questions and colon reveals. "The result? 3x faster." "The best part: it learns." Just say it. FAQ questions and a reader's own question ("Need to share a screenshot?") are fine.

  5. Stock openers and phrases. "In today's fast-paced world," "Whether you're X or Y," "Here's the thing," "Say goodbye to," "X, reimagined," "Unlock the power of," "Take it to the next level."

  6. Em dashes in short copy. Headlines, subheads, ads, social posts, and subject lines use none.

Keep these rare
  • At most one fragment and one list of three per section (a hero, a page section, or one short post). CTA microcopy and a real three-feature list are fine.

  • Words like seamless, robust, powerful, unlock, and streamline: replace them with the fact they stand in for.

  • Swap test: if a line would work unchanged on a competitor's site, rewrite it. If you lack the differentiator to fix it, flag [NEED: differentiator].

Check before delivering

Before handing over any draft, run the self-check in references/ai-tells.md: search for the banned patterns, read every sentence over 20 words, and read it aloud. Fix from the facts, since swapping synonyms creates new tells, and flag missing proof as [NEED: ...] rather than inventing it.

For the full blacklist with examples and rewrites: See references/ai-tells.md

Removing tells leaves copy clean but flat. For a full rewrite, build a writer first (who's writing, what they know cold, what they'd cut, what they think) and check for second-generation tells such as wisdom-shaped sentences and tidy closers. See references/ai-tells.md.


Best Practices

Be Direct

Get to the point. Don't bury the value in qualifications.

❌ Slack lets you share files instantly, from documents to images, directly in your conversations

✅ Need to share a screenshot? Send as many documents, images, and audio files as your heart desires.

Use Rhetorical Questions

A question that names the reader's pain can open a section well.

  • "Hate returning stuff to Amazon?"

  • "Tired of chasing approvals?"

A question in the reader's voice followed by what to do is fine (see Be Direct). A question that labels your own claim ("The result? 3x faster.") is an AI tell.

Use Analogies When Helpful

Analogies make abstract concepts concrete and memorable.

Pepper in Humor (When Appropriate)

Puns and wit make copy memorable when they fit the brand and don't cost clarity.


Page Structure Framework

Above the Fold

Headline

  • Your single most important message

  • Communicate core value proposition

  • Specific > generic

Example formulas:

  • "{Achieve outcome} without {pain point}"

  • "The {category} for {audience}"

  • "Never {unpleasant event} again"

  • "{Question highlighting main pain point}"

For comprehensive headline formulas: See references/copy-frameworks.md

Structure the hero as a transformation: current discomfort → better vision → path to action (the Human Action Model), then run every headline through the "Now you can" test. See references/copy-frameworks.md

For natural transition phrases: See references/natural-transitions.md

Subheadline

  • Expands on headline

  • Adds specificity

  • 1-2 sentences max

Primary CTA

  • Action-oriented button text

  • Communicate what they get: "Start Free Trial" > "Sign Up"

Core Sections
SectionPurpose
Social ProofBuild credibility (logos, stats, testimonials)
Problem/PainShow you understand their situation
Solution/BenefitsConnect to outcomes (3-5 key benefits)
How It WorksReduce perceived complexity (3-4 steps)
Objection HandlingFAQ, comparisons, guarantees
Final CTARecap value, repeat CTA, risk reversal

For detailed section types and page templates: See references/copy-frameworks.md


CTA Copy Guidelines

Weak CTAs (avoid):

  • Submit, Sign Up, Learn More, Click Here, Get Started

Strong CTAs (use):

  • Start Free Trial

  • Get [Specific Thing]

  • See [Product] in Action

  • Create Your First [Thing]

  • Download the Guide

Formula: [Action Verb] + [What They Get] + [Qualifier if needed]

Examples:

  • "Start My Free Trial"

  • "Get the Complete Checklist"

  • "See Pricing for My Team"


Page-Specific Guidance

Homepage
  • Serve multiple audiences without being generic

  • Lead with broadest value proposition

  • Provide clear paths for different visitor intents

Landing Page
  • Single message, single CTA

  • Match headline to ad/traffic source

  • Complete argument on one page

Pricing Page
  • Help visitors choose the right plan

  • Address "which is right for me?" anxiety

  • Make recommended plan obvious

Feature Page
  • Connect feature → benefit → outcome

  • Show use cases and examples

  • Clear path to try or buy

About Page
  • Tell the story of why you exist

  • Connect mission to customer benefit

  • Still include a CTA


Voice and Tone

Before writing, establish:

Formality level:

  • Casual/conversational

  • Professional but friendly

  • Formal/enterprise

Brand personality:

  • Playful or serious?

  • Bold or understated?

  • Technical or accessible?

Maintain consistency, but adjust intensity:

  • Headlines can be bolder

  • Body copy should be clearer

  • CTAs should be action-oriented


Output Format

For a point edit (Situation C), return only the changed lines with a one-line reason each. Skip the annotations and alternatives below unless asked.

When writing page copy, provide:

Page Copy

Organized by section:

  • Headline, Subheadline, CTA

  • Section headers and body copy

  • Secondary CTAs

Annotations

For key elements, explain:

  • Why you made this choice

  • What principle it applies

Alternatives

For headlines and CTAs, provide 2-3 options:

  • Option A: [copy]. Rationale: [why]

  • Option B: [copy]. Rationale: [why]

Meta Content (if relevant)
  • Page title (for SEO)

  • Meta description


  • copy-editing: For polishing existing copy (use after your draft)

  • cro: If page structure/strategy needs work, not just copy

  • emails: For email copywriting

  • popups: For popup and modal copy

  • ab-testing: To test copy variations

Files

references/copy-frameworks.md

Copy Frameworks Reference

Headline formulas, page section types, and structural templates.

Contents

  • Headline Formulas (outcome-focused, problem-focused, audience-focused, differentiation-focused, proof-focused, additional formulas)

  • Landing Page Section Types (core sections, supporting sections)

  • Page Structure Templates (feature-heavy page, varied engaging page, compact landing page, enterprise/B2B landing page, product launch page)

  • Section Writing Tips (problem section, benefits section, how it works section, testimonial selection)

  • Clarity & Message-Market Fit (the "Now you can" test, Human Action Model, the Perception Gap, the SavvyCal case, clarity metrics)

Headline Formulas

These are starting points. Fill every slot with specifics, and check the result against ai-tells.md: a "without" or "Never X again" headline is fine once, but don't follow it with a negation list.

Outcome-Focused

{Achieve desirable outcome} without {pain point}

Understand how users are really experiencing your site without drowning in numbers

{Achieve desirable outcome} by {how product makes it possible}

Generate more leads by seeing which companies visit your site

Turn {input} into {outcome}

Turn your hard-earned sales into repeat customers

[Achieve outcome] in [timeframe]

Get your tax refund in 10 days


Problem-Focused

Never {unpleasant event} again

Never miss a sales opportunity again

{Question highlighting the main pain point}

Hate returning stuff to Amazon?

Stop [pain]. Start [pleasure].

Stop chasing invoices. Start getting paid on time.


Audience-Focused

{Key feature/product type} for {target audience}

Advanced analytics for Shopify e-commerce

{Key feature/product type} for {target audience} to {what it's used for}

An online whiteboard for teams to ideate and brainstorm together

You don't have to {skills or resources} to {achieve desirable outcome}

With Ahrefs, you don't have to be an SEO pro to rank higher and get more traffic


Differentiation-Focused

The {opposite of usual process} way to {achieve desirable outcome}

The easiest way to turn your passion into income

The [category] that [key differentiator]

The CRM that updates itself


Proof-Focused

[Number] [people] use [product] to [outcome]

50,000 marketers use Drip to send better emails

{Key benefit of your product}

Sound clear in online meetings


Additional Formulas

The simple way to {outcome}

The simple way to track your time

Finally, {category} that {benefit}

Finally, accounting software that doesn't suck

{Outcome} without {common pain}

Build your website without writing code

Get {benefit} from your {thing}

Get more revenue from your existing traffic

{Action verb} your {thing} like {admirable example}

Market your SaaS like a Fortune 500

What if you could {desirable outcome}?

What if you could close deals 30% faster?

The {adjective} {category} built for {audience}

The lightweight CRM built for startups


Landing Page Section Types

Core Sections

Hero (Above the Fold)

  • Headline + subheadline

  • Primary CTA

  • Supporting visual (product screenshot, hero image)

  • Optional: Social proof bar

Social Proof Bar

  • Customer logos (recognizable > many)

  • Key metric ("10,000+ teams")

  • Star rating with review count

  • Short testimonial snippet

Problem/Pain Section

  • Articulate their problem better than they can

  • Create recognition ("that's exactly my situation")

  • Hint at cost of not solving it

Solution/Benefits Section

  • Bridge from problem to your solution

  • 3-5 key benefits (not 10)

  • Each: headline + explanation + proof if available

How It Works

  • 3-4 numbered steps

  • Reduces perceived complexity

  • Each step: action + outcome

Final CTA Section

  • Recap value proposition

  • Repeat primary CTA

  • Risk reversal (guarantee, free trial)


Supporting Sections

Testimonials

  • Full quotes with names, roles, companies

  • Photos when possible

  • Specific results over vague praise

  • Formats: quote cards, video, tweet embeds

Case Studies

  • Problem → Solution → Results

  • Specific metrics and outcomes

  • Customer name and context

  • Can be snippets with "Read more" links

Use Cases

  • Different ways product is used

  • Helps visitors self-identify

  • "For marketers who need X" format

Personas / "Built For" Sections

  • Explicitly call out target audience

  • "Perfect for [role]" blocks

  • Addresses "Is this for me?" question

FAQ Section

  • Address common objections

  • Good for SEO

  • Reduces support burden

  • 5-10 most common questions

Comparison Section

  • vs. competitors (name them or don't)

  • vs. status quo (spreadsheets, manual processes)

  • Tables or side-by-side format

Integrations / Partners

  • Logos of tools you connect with

  • "Works with your stack" messaging

  • Builds credibility

Founder Story / Manifesto

  • Why you built this

  • What you believe

  • Emotional connection

  • Differentiates from faceless competitors

Demo / Product Tour

  • Interactive demos

  • Video walkthroughs

  • GIF previews

  • Shows product in action

Pricing Preview

  • Teaser even on non-pricing pages

  • Starting price or "from $X/mo"

  • Moves decision-makers forward

Guarantee / Risk Reversal

  • Money-back guarantee

  • Free trial terms

  • "Cancel anytime"

  • Reduces friction

Stats Section

  • Key metrics that build credibility

  • "10,000+ customers"

  • "4.9/5 rating"

  • "$2M saved for customers"


Page Structure Templates

Feature-Heavy Page (Weak)
1. Hero
2. Feature 1
3. Feature 2
4. Feature 3
5. Feature 4
6. CTA

This is a list, not a persuasive narrative.


Varied, Engaging Page (Strong)
1. Hero with clear value prop
2. Social proof bar (logos or stats)
3. Problem/pain section
4. How it works (3 steps)
5. Key benefits (2-3, not 10)
6. Testimonial
7. Use cases or personas
8. Comparison to alternatives
9. Case study snippet
10. FAQ
11. Final CTA with guarantee

This tells a story and addresses objections.


Compact Landing Page
1. Hero (headline, subhead, CTA, image)
2. Social proof bar
3. 3 key benefits with icons
4. Testimonial
5. How it works (3 steps)
6. Final CTA with guarantee

Good for ad landing pages where brevity matters.


Enterprise/B2B Landing Page
1. Hero (outcome-focused headline)
2. Logo bar (recognizable companies)
3. Problem section (business pain)
4. Solution overview
5. Use cases by role/department
6. Security/compliance section
7. Integration logos
8. Case study with metrics
9. ROI/value section
10. Contact/demo CTA

Addresses enterprise buyer concerns.


Product Launch Page
1. Hero with launch announcement
2. Video demo or walkthrough
3. Feature highlights (3-5)
4. Before/after comparison
5. Early testimonials
6. Launch pricing or early access offer
7. CTA with urgency

Good for ProductHunt, launches, or announcements.


Section Writing Tips

Problem Section

Start with phrases like:

  • "You know the feeling..."

  • "If you're like most [role]..."

  • "Every day, [audience] struggles with..."

  • "We've all been there..."

Then describe:

  • The specific frustration

  • The time/money wasted

  • The impact on their work/life

Benefits Section

For each benefit, include:

  • Headline: The outcome they get

  • Body: How it works (1-2 sentences)

  • Proof: Number, testimonial, or example (optional)

How It Works Section

Each step should be:

  • Numbered: Creates sense of progress

  • Simple verb: "Connect," "Set up," "Get"

  • Outcome-oriented: What they get from this step

Example:

  1. Connect your tools (takes 2 minutes)

  2. Set your preferences

  3. Get automated reports every Monday

Testimonial Selection

Best testimonials include:

  • Specific results ("increased conversions by 32%")

  • Before/after context ("We used to spend hours...")

  • Role + company for credibility

  • Something quotable and specific

Avoid testimonials that just say:

  • "Great product!"

  • "Love it!"

  • "Easy to use!"


Clarity & Message-Market Fit

Headline formulas give you the shape of a line. These tools tell you whether the line is actually working: whether it's clear, whether it maps to how the reader already thinks, and whether it lands with the right person. Positioning is the prologue to your novel: it sets up everything that follows. Get it clear and the rest of the page writes itself.

The "Now you can" Test

A fast gut-check for any headline or benefit line. Mentally prefix it with "Now you can…". If the result is both compelling and true, the line is doing its job. If it reads as vague, obvious, or a stretch, rewrite it.

The test works because "Now you can…" forces the copy into the reader's world. It has to name a concrete new ability they didn't have before. Feature-speak and buzzwords collapse under it.

Original line"Now you can…" versionVerdict
"Powerful analytics platform"Now you can… have a powerful analytics platformFails. not a new ability, just a description
"See which companies visit your site"Now you can… see which companies visit your siteWorks. compelling + true
"Streamline your workflow"Now you can… streamline your workflowFails. vague, unfalsifiable
"Send unlimited docs, images, and audio in one place"Now you can… send unlimited docs, images, and audio in one placeWorks. concrete + true

Use it as a filter, not a formula: draft with the headline formulas above, then run each candidate through "Now you can…" and keep the survivors.

The Human Action Model (landing-page narrative spine)

Ludwig von Mises' Human Action Model explains why anyone acts: a person acts only when three things line up. Every above-the-fold that converts follows the same three-beat spine:

  1. Current discomfort: the felt problem, named in the reader's own words. They have to recognize their situation ("that's exactly me").

  2. Better vision: a clearly imagined, more satisfying state. What life looks like once the discomfort is gone.

  3. Path to action: the belief that this specific step closes the gap between the two. The product is the bridge, and the CTA is how they cross it.

Miss any beat and the reader stalls. No discomfort = no reason to move. No vision = no destination. No path = no reason to believe you're the way there.

Mapping it onto the hero:

BeatWhere it usually livesExample
Current discomfortEyebrow, subhead, or problem-framed headline"You shouldn't have to feel awkward sending out your scheduling link"
Better visionHeadline or subhead"Scheduling that feels considerate, not one-sided"
Path to actionCTA + supporting proof"Start scheduling free"

This is the transformation spine underneath the "6 essential sections" of a landing page (hero, social proof, problem, solution, how-it-works, and final CTA). The hero states the transformation; the rest of the page substantiates each beat.

The Perception Gap

The same benefit can read as a selling point to one segment and a red flag to another. The gap is between what you think you're saying and what a given reader hears through their own risk tolerance.

The fix is matching the value prop to the reader's risk tolerance. Segment first, then swap the framing.

Benefit as writtenStartup / early-adopter hearsEnterprise / risk-averse hears
"Move fast. Ship in a weekend."Speed, momentum (✅)Immature, unstable (🚩)
"Brand-new approach"Innovative edge (✅)Unproven, risky (🚩)
"Enterprise-grade security & SLAs"Bloated, slow, expensive (🚩)Safe, trustworthy (✅)
"Trusted by the Fortune 500"Not built for me (🚩)Proven, de-risked (✅)

Value-prop swap in practice (same product, two audiences):

  • Startup landing page: "Ship your first integration this afternoon. Pay by card and skip the sales call."

  • Enterprise landing page: "SOC 2 Type II, 99.99% uptime SLA, and a named implementation lead. Roll out with confidence."

When a page has to serve both, don't average them into mush. Segment the traffic (separate pages, or a persona split) and let each read its own version of the truth.

Worked Example: SavvyCal (message-market fit)

SavvyCal (a scheduling tool) originally led with feature-forward copy. They rewrote the hero around a single felt discomfort:

"You shouldn't have to feel awkward sending out your scheduling link."

That one line roughly tripled (3×) conversions. It works because it hits all three beats of the Human Action Model at once:

  • Discomfort: the small social awkwardness of "here's my link, pick a time," named exactly as users feel it.

  • Vision: scheduling that feels considerate to both people.

  • Path: SavvyCal's overlay-your-calendar mechanic is the bridge, so the CTA feels like the obvious next step.

The lesson: message-market fit beats feature lists. The winning line named a real feeling the reader hadn't heard a scheduling tool acknowledge before. Run your own hero through "Now you can…" and the Human Action Model to find that line.

Clarity Beats Cleverness (the metrics)

When teams measure it, clarity is what moves the numbers. Figures cited in Corey Haines's Founding Marketing (Ch. 3) associate clearer positioning and copy with:

  • +81% conversions

  • −38% sales cycle (shorter time to close)

  • −28% CAC (lower customer acquisition cost)

  • +175% referrals

The mechanism: clear copy lets the right buyer self-qualify fast and the wrong one bounce early, so every downstream metric improves. Clever copy that requires decoding does the opposite. It adds a comprehension tax at the exact moment attention is scarcest.

Practical rule: if a reader has to pause to figure out what you mean, you've already lost. When forced to choose between a clever line and a clear one, ship the clear one, then use the tests above ("Now you can…", the Human Action Model, the Perception Gap) to make the clear line compelling too.

Requirements and compatibility

Works with: Claude Code, Claude apps, OpenAI Codex, GitHub Copilot, Cursor, Gemini CLI, Kiro, OpenCode, Goose, Amp, Roo Code, JetBrains Junie, Factory Droid, Devin (ex-Windsurf), Mistral Vibe, OpenHands, Letta

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Corey Haines
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